麻煩幫忙&討論如何翻譯歌曲[非常女]為英文(20點)

Question

在下最近想將「非常女」這首歌介紹給居住國外的友人，
不自量力的嘗試翻譯了歌詞。
由於能力不足，成果只能至此，十分粗糙，
於是想請各位幫忙翻譯、討論，給點意見，謝謝。


非常女

緣投沒什麼稀奇，有錢的踢一邊 
Handsome is nothing, ???
看來看去也是有氣魄的人卡呷意 
Only ones with bold souls are my type

風呀～請你將我的愛情吹向天邊 
Wind, please carry my love to the edge of the sky
化成雨水灑醒不解情意的伊 
Transform into rain and make him realise my feelings

一陣風一句話，一滴雨水一份癡 
Wind represents words, rain represents devotion
用真情編織的夢比花蜜卡甜 
Dreams woven by true love are sweeter than honey
短短的感情路，卻是千萬年 
??? ???

癡情沒什麼意義，有勢的請一邊 
Obsession is meaningless, those with power get out of my way 
想來想去也是有理想的人卡呷意 
Only the ones with ideal are my type

月呀～請你照明我的感情路 
Moon, please light up my path of love
不通乎阮不知何去何從 
Don't leave me lost in the dark

一場夢一段情，一滴眼淚一陣悲 
??? ???
用思念編織的夢永遠在纏綿 
Dreams woven by longing are always touching
酸甘甜的情路，夢圓等何時 
Bitter-sweet and sour love, when will dreams come true



PS: 純知識交流，使用翻譯軟體必刪，多謝。

? · Accepted Answer

非常女   
Pure Lady

緣投沒什麼稀奇，有錢的踢一邊 
I dont' need the handsome.    I dont' need the rich.
看來看去也是有氣魄的人卡呷意 
The best one for me is the most brave here.
風啊!!請你將我的愛情吹向天邊
Say a little pray to the wind.       Wish to bring my love into the sky.
化成雨水灑醒不解情意的伊
become the rain to get his eyes.
一陣風一句話　     一滴雨水一分癡
The wind,The word       The water,The love 

用真情編織的夢比花蜜卡甜
The dream of love is such sweet than the flower 
短短的感情路　確是千萬年
To love for a moment       To pay for thousand years
   
癡情沒什麼意義　有勢的請一邊
I don't need the blind passion.    I don't need the strength.
想來想去還是有理想的人卡甲意
the best one for me is the dreamer here.
月啊!!請妳照明阮的感情路
Say a little pray to the moon.     wish to light up my love under the sky.
不通乎阮不知何去何從
( Don't let me down. )   Dont' let me nowhere to go n hide...

一場夢一段情　一滴眼淚一陣悲
The dream,The love      The tear,The sorrow
用思念編織的夢永遠的甜蜜
The dream of love is such happiness always.
酸甘甜的情路　夢圓等何時
The way of love is sweet also acid.   When is the day my love coming.....


PS: 我只做情境式的翻譯.不完全100%全文照翻喔~ 敬請參考! ^^
歌名.我根據非常女的個性去做解釋.她的個性單純....

2008-03-29 03:28:05 補充：
歌名也可翻成  
the special lady (girl)
the unique girl 
exclusive

2008-03-31 04:18:13 補充：
ps: 改好詞.記得哼唱看看喔~是否可以搭配旋律~ ^^

要把不同國家的風俗文化甚至藝術推廣到國外.
本就因為語言而有隔閤.真是辛苦你嘍喔~
呵呵~甘八ㄉㄟ ㄋㄟ~ 加油!! ^^
有問題~歡迎隨時上來喔!!可以參考大家的想法再融會貫通~
那是一定會有辦法的啦~呵呵~ ^^

Elisa · Answer

These are very good translations from the two answered and from you.  Great Job!  By the way, you need to add "a" infront of thousand years.

Claudia · Answer

哈哈......有趣有趣，很難得嘗試把閩南語歌翻成英文，我也來挑戰一下，翻得不好請見諒，大家互相交流集思廣益，相信您可以寄給您外國朋友最棒的一份版本

非常女 
Peculiar Lady (我也很喜歡另一位大大翻譯的Pure Lady，把她的率真個性翻出來，但我選擇用peculiar，因為想到Robbie Williams的一首歌，形容一個人很奇特／罕見／有獨特個性的)

緣投沒什麼稀奇，有錢的踢一邊 
Handsome guy and rich man are put aside
看來看去也是有氣魄的人卡呷意 
My Mr. Right is the one most heroic
風啊!!請你將我的愛情吹向天邊
Wind! Please blow my love to the sky
化成雨水灑醒不解情意的伊
become the rain to sprinkle him awaken and catch his eyes
一陣風一句話　 一滴雨水一分癡
The wind, the word, the raindrop, and my love

用真情編織的夢比花蜜卡甜
The dream weaved by true love, sweeter than the flower nectar
短短的感情路　確是千萬年
This short love road takes me thousands of years

癡情沒什麼意義　有勢的請一邊
Spoony is vain, the men at court are negligible
想來想去還是有理想的人卡甲意
My Mr. Right is the one most ambitious
月啊!!請妳照明阮的感情路
Moon! Please lighten the road to my love
不通乎阮不知何去何從                                                                                                       Let me know where to go

一場夢一段情　一滴眼淚一陣悲
The dream, the love, the teardrop, the sorrow
用思念編織的夢永遠的甜蜜
The dream weaved by love is eternal happiness
酸甘甜的情路　夢圓等何時
Love is a mixed feeling of sweet and acid                                                                                            When will my dream of love come true?

麻煩幫忙&討論如何翻譯歌曲[非常女]為英文(20點)

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