請問這兩個句子哪個正確

兩句中的them是錯字，應改為their：

1. The government encourages the university students after their graduation

to go abroad and to explore the field of nontraditional vocation .

2. The government encourages the university students to go abroad and

to explore the field of nontraditional vocation after their graduation.

第1句錯誤，第2句正確。

第1句的after their graduation在句子結構上是修飾encourages，這不合語意邏輯，因為大學生畢業後就不再稱為university students了，政府在他們畢業後作鼓勵，應稱之為university graduates才合邏輯。

第2句的after their graduation在句子結構上是修飾to go與to explore，這在文法與語意上都非常通順。

兩句都錯，因為 them 應該是 their。

更正後，第二句比較好。

因為先講做什麼事 (go and explore)，再講什麼時候 (after graduation)。

2015-04-14 22:10:07 補充：

例如：

I go to your place after school.

就比

I after school go to your place. 來得自然。

In my opinion, both are correct (except the misuse of "them").

The sentence "after their graduation" is a prepositional phrase and used as an ADVRB to modify "go".

2015-04-14 23:14:26 補充：

If it really depend upon what you want to emphasize. Take master 知足常樂's sentence as an example, you can write:

After school, I go to your place.

I go to your place after school.

2015-04-14 23:15:12 補充：

The first one is to emphasize "after school", the second one is just to state it plainly without emphasis.

2015-04-14 23:33:34 補充：

This saying is just for your own reference!