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Hi,

I am very interested in this job. One of the reasons is that

I feel so comfortable in a quiet place. The second reason is that

I myself love reading so much and often borrow books from libraries.It would be

more convenient for me to borrow stuff if I worked in a library.

Speaking of my last reason why I like this job is that I love clean and tidy places. Being a library assitant, I will have to organize things and handle

all materials tidily for people to find what they need easily just simply by

following the machine-readable codes on each book.

I think my job would have something to do with helping people around the library.

I would love to do that. Thank you very much!

Good luck to you!

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2008-12-29 01:31:09 補充：

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其他文法有002個答案嗰位網友比意見, 我淨係想講睇你編自我介紹嘅第一個印象就係有D"中式"feel, 假如你將"The first reason"改做"First of all", 將"The second reason is"改做"Secondly,", 將"The last reason is"改為"Last but not least,"咁就比較好D.

1) so + adjective + that

e.g. The story is so touching that it moves me to tears

so silent that I feel very comfortable.

2) I like reading very much.

3) I like cleanliness and tidyness. (應用名詞)

4) And being a library assistant, I need to.......

5) To find out what they want by following the number...... (加 by)

6) My job can help them

I haven't been to one but I think your short introduction is fine as long as you say it smoothly.

*Just a suggestion, you may want to change the 2nd sentence - word "slient" to "quiet", to me "quiet" sounds better, it suits more for "comfortable".