「英文」高手 請幫我看一下文法有沒有錯給20點

1.on the morning today

2.and i said"today is the best day in my life"

3.I was going downstairs,

4.I saw my mother was watching television

5.I’m going to learn English,can you turn off the TV

6.I switched computer on and surfed on the internet

7.Today we will learn this word

8.and then the phone cell was vibrating

9.it was my best friend BLUE

10.I answered the phone

11.I went into the garage

12.we played basketball together.

when we finished the playing,I forgot that my classmate, AJ,and i to sing a song ,

13.and same sounded out again YA~MY~HA~

14.my voice is so terrble

15.Oh time is late and I should go home

16.I started my motorcycle again and same sounded out again YA~MY~HA~

17.When I arrived at home , I opened the door ,and I discovered something I missed

18.I learn from this story about two things

19.First is never converse with your motorcycle

2008-03-28 01:14:32 補充：

4.I saw my mother watching television

2008-03-28 01:15:08 補充：

6.I switched computer on and surfed the internet

2008-03-28 01:15:41 補充：

8.and then the cell phone was vibrating

2008-03-29 22:22:29 補充：

又發現一些錯誤了

1. I woke up and I raised both hands up

2.「Today is the best day in my life!」in a loud voice

ps第一段不可以一直,,,,

要擅用句點

試著改改看

2008-03-29 22:23:06 補充：

3.Mom, I’m going to learn English,can you turn off the TV?

4.Suddenly,some dialogue appeared on television

5.I put the pause and the world suddenly become quiet!!

6.I forget my mom~~

大概是這樣

你寫得很生動喔

2008-03-30 19:46:44 補充：

7.I turned on the computer and surfed the internet