Tweaked, titled, and reposted...your thoughts please?

I liked it. I can understand the point and the reason of repeated words. Don't let other people get you down saying it isn't good because you are an amazing poet. If you read it with a steady pace as I have then you can understand the meaning behind the words. It takes time to understand poetry. It took me three times to read it before i actually found the right pace so I could actually understand it but besides that it was awesome.

Quite a chore to read.

First of all, it looks like a list, either grocery or registration. And the repetition of words such as temptation and everlast, so cliche and sets fire to the corpse that this so-called poem is.

I like it. It seems like a random string of thoughts, but you can feel a deeper meaning hidden underneath.

As long as it means something to you to me it means making a mistake over and over even when you know it's wrong.

Just a list of random thoughts. No rhyme, no reason.

forgettable collection of words, weak images/

not so good...sorry